My family publishing

WALT organise our ideas in  our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

In my family there are 7 people my mum dad and my sister and brother.

My dad's name is Paulie. He is a house builder he is  48 years old and he loves lollies.

My mums name is hope she is  48 years old  she even Mow’s the lawn she loves  reading books too.

My sisters name is Nicole she is 18 years old  and she is funny when she is with her friends not every day my sister and me walk to my auntie's

My brothers name is Max he is 19 years old Max works at a Cafe.  Sometimes when we go to town he is really fun .

My  my other brother's name is Shannon  he   is 30  years old he has two children their names are   Jaraiah and  Alliana Jaraiah is  1 year old and Alliana 9 months.

My family is kind 


Reflections:
I did really well at writing
I did really well at planning.
I wish I will do better and putting my keywords into sentences.